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(Frage) beantwortet  | | Datum: | 21:13 Mi 27.06.2012 | | Autor: | SallyIda |
eine Zeitleiste bis 2012 über die entwicklung der kommunikation
ich dachte ich könnte dann so überleiten bzw weitermachen:
In the near future mobile medium communication has radically transformed the economy and our daily living unimagiable in an earler age. The media as we know it has exceeded to exist, moble has turned the world into a global information hub and has opened radical new business opportunities.
-People will living in the smart cloud
-and mobile payment will becomming a mass phenomenon
-The newspapers will stop the delivery of printing newspapers und offers E-Papers readers for 1 Euro
könnte bitte jemand nach der grammatik schauen? danke schön im vorraus
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(Antwort) fertig  | | Datum: | 21:26 Do 28.06.2012 | | Autor: | chrisno |
Meine Kommentare als nicht-Anglist:
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> In the near future mobile medium communication has
Ich denke, das has möglich ist (future perfect?)
> radically transformed the economy and our daily living
> unimagiable in an earler age.
Diese letzte Zeile solltest Du anders anschließen.
> The media as we know it has
> exceeded to exist, moble has turned the world into a global
exceed? Was willst Du ausdrücken?
moble?
> information hub and has opened radical new business
> opportunities.
> -People will living in the smart cloud
will live
> -and mobile payment will becomming a mass phenomenon
will become
> -The newspapers will stop the delivery of printing
printed
> newspapers und offers E-Papers readers for 1 Euro
will offer E-Paper
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